Miss Magic's Forum- The Story Site for New Writers to Strut Their Stuff!
March 29, 2024, 02:02:09 am
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
News: Welcome to our newest member, ydanniegrathi! May they enjoy their time on Miss Magics!                                                                                                                                                     Look out for New Stories by:     terrimcintyre      Enjoy your time on Miss Magic's!                                                                                                                                                    ~new members wanted!~
 
  Home Help Search Gallery Links Staff List Login Register  

2~The Magics-The story of tear drops from a noble

+-+-
+- User Stats:
Welcome, Guest.
Please login or register.
 
 
 
Forgot your password?
+- Recent Posts ezBlock
DIY bride by MittRichards22
December 23, 2018, 12:41:38 am

Re: Hi by piersdad
April 28, 2018, 02:40:54 pm

Re: Where did that come from???!!! by piersdad
November 30, 2016, 04:04:06 pm

+- Members Online
10 Guests, 0 Users
Pages: [1]
  Print  
Author Topic: 2~The Magics-The story of tear drops from a noble  (Read 259 times)
0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.
mollytime
Administrator
Sr. Member
*****

Karma: 3
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 415



View Profile WWW
« on: February 01, 2010, 02:09:58 am »

This one counts as well. I'm up to two!

This story has been removed for publishing. We apologize for any inconvenience.


http://missmagicsforum.smfforfree.com/index.php/topic,99.0.html3~The Magics- the story of a travelling gypsy
« Last Edit: September 17, 2010, 03:15:26 am by mollytime » Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
[Quoted on Live For Peace]

Share on Facebook Share on Twitter

Miss Magic
Administrator
Sr. Member
*****

Karma: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 413



View Profile WWW
« Reply #1 on: February 01, 2010, 10:28:09 pm »

Wow, your short stories grow more awesome the more I read. Do continue!!!!!
You could almost write a book of these shorts Tongue
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

Humans are like Slinkys- not good for much, but amusing to push downstairs
mollytime
Administrator
Sr. Member
*****

Karma: 3
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 415



View Profile WWW
« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2010, 01:06:49 am »

Actually, the join up. Lol. Wink
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
[Quoted on Live For Peace]
piersdad
Administrator
Full Member
*****

Karma: 1
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 151



View Profile WWW
« Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 01:19:31 am »

you have got yourself a series here
getting hooked on the this second one 
a good idea to have short stories linked  as the reader wanmts to read more of the same.
dont like the white  on black bacground as some older monitors will not display the writing enough to read.
ok for digital monitors no good for the older ones.
 
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

the impossible now miracles a little longer
mollytime
Administrator
Sr. Member
*****

Karma: 3
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 415



View Profile WWW
« Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 01:57:00 am »

yeah, I hope everybody likes it. The only problem is I might take it down soon. I think I might publish it. Not that anyone looks at it apart from us, eh? Lol.
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
[Quoted on Live For Peace]
piersdad
Administrator
Full Member
*****

Karma: 1
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 151



View Profile WWW
« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2010, 03:00:05 am »

thanks for changing the background
you will have to go over it word for word to check for missing letters
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

the impossible now miracles a little longer
Miss Magic
Administrator
Sr. Member
*****

Karma: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 413



View Profile WWW
« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2010, 04:54:19 pm »

mmm yush, a few errors but otherwise brilliant!
there are a few segments that could be revised but Wink it's really good, I love the catchlines hidden in it
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

Humans are like Slinkys- not good for much, but amusing to push downstairs
mollytime
Administrator
Sr. Member
*****

Karma: 3
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 415



View Profile WWW
« Reply #7 on: April 06, 2010, 03:21:32 am »

uh, catchlines?
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
[Quoted on Live For Peace]
Miss Magic
Administrator
Sr. Member
*****

Karma: 2
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 413



View Profile WWW
« Reply #8 on: April 06, 2010, 03:28:24 am »

little lines throughout the story to keep you hooked Smiley
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

Humans are like Slinkys- not good for much, but amusing to push downstairs
mollytime
Administrator
Sr. Member
*****

Karma: 3
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 415



View Profile WWW
« Reply #9 on: May 20, 2010, 02:59:48 pm »

k. now we going to start editing this thing. we'll start with number one, so uh. dont knwo why I'm typing on this thing. Please start pointing out spelling mistakes, parts that could be re done, k? Now.
Report Spam   Report to moderator   Logged

elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
[Quoted on Live For Peace]

Pages: [1]
  Print  
 
Jump to:  

Search


Advanced Search
+-Shoutbox
February 26, 2017, 08:29:23 am piersdad says: found i have still admin on this page  sadly storydad has dissappeared  thank goodness some of my stories are still about
December 02, 2012, 11:20:41 am piersdad says: we have a lot of people  just posting  some thing  never related to writing  and then advertizing their site on their profile  if this gets out of hand we could go viral and get 40 a day of this sort of person spamming the site
May 17, 2012, 09:05:50 pm terrimcintyre says: How is your book doing, Jennifer? Did you see my review on Amazon?
May 31, 2011, 12:52:28 am Miss Magic says: thanks piersdad
May 30, 2011, 09:41:00 pm piersdad says: Oledakit is the cupprit and ip banned as well as the name
May 30, 2011, 09:39:24 pm piersdad says: removed heaps of spam this morning
January 25, 2011, 11:18:53 pm mollytime says: awwww.
so how many have we got now?
January 05, 2011, 04:24:06 pm Miss Magic says: Loss of members: I entered everyone's names into a listed spammer database due to suspicious joining. Sadly, those that I found with 3 or more hits on that site have been banned and removed from MM's Forum
December 13, 2010, 02:52:43 pm mollytime says: WHERE DID ALL THE SHOUTS GO??
I win.
December 13, 2010, 05:26:40 am Miss Magic says: wow!
I have a few more chapters of The New Beginning to put up in a few days Smiley I'm amazed at all the new members!
View Shout History
Powered by EzPortal
Site Meter
Bookmark this site! | Upgrade This Forum
SMF For Free - Create your own Forum


Powered by SMF | SMF © 2016, Simple Machines
Privacy Policy