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« on: February 02, 2010, 01:08:43 am »

This is the third one. I'm winning!



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4~The magics-The story of an innocent girl
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elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
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« Reply #1 on: February 07, 2010, 01:51:37 am »

Katie packed the things away ad held onto the purple crystal while she rode
another good story  only found one letter missed  could be more
this is the worst part of story telling the missed letters that the spell check does not think is wrong
can see the linking of the rest of the stories now.
like a mystery unfolding
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« Reply #2 on: March 15, 2010, 03:52:40 am »

These stories of yours are amazing, so full of life and well plotted out!
As piersdad has pointed out, there are a few slight spelling errors that can be drafted out, but the storyline is brilliant!
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« Reply #3 on: March 18, 2010, 02:39:47 am »

make a list of mistakes.
Hey! I got an idea. W should make a board for mistakes, where we put up a list of mistaes we see around and people can cross them off as they go.
Cool huh?
Yes, poease point out my horrible mistakes and I will get round to smudging them out with my dirt sleev and inking them in properly with a grubby pencil.
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elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
[Quoted on Live For Peace]
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« Reply #4 on: April 05, 2010, 05:02:43 pm »

'poease'
'sleev'
'dirt'
'W'
'mistaes'
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« Reply #5 on: April 06, 2010, 03:21:08 am »

yeah. Thanks.
*being sarcastic*
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elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
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« Reply #6 on: April 06, 2010, 03:28:32 am »

Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: April 07, 2010, 04:28:24 am »

the most humorous mistake i saw once was for a recipe that needed stewed apples
the actual spelling was


a cup full of spewed apples
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« Reply #8 on: April 15, 2010, 10:04:12 pm »

*sniggle*
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« Reply #9 on: April 23, 2010, 07:18:02 pm »

*snort*.

Oops, was that out loud?
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elmo loves wasabi, that's why elmo has no eyelids[quoted by elmo]

say ha:HA! Say it again: HA!
Put it together and what have you got?:HA HA!
And they said I couldn't make you laugh...
[Quoted on Live For Peace]

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February 26, 2017, 08:29:23 am piersdad says: found i have still admin on this page  sadly storydad has dissappeared  thank goodness some of my stories are still about
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